模板一（适用于警示型）

●第一段

This article reveals that…has become one of the prominent issues(which are closely related with people’s health/of the modern Chinese society/in the area of…) Most people take it for granted that…should…However,it is not always the case. Scientists found that these problems are actually caused by…This is indicated in a survey recently made in…by…

注释：本文揭示了/说明了一个问题⋯⋯（该问题与人们的健康息息相关/成了社会问题/成了某个领域的问题）。很多人都想当然地认为⋯⋯应该⋯⋯。然而，事实并非如此。科学家们发现这些问题是由⋯⋯引起的，然而实际上是因为⋯⋯造成的。该观点由⋯⋯在⋯⋯做的一个调查报告中得出。

Firstly,…is especially good for…In addition,…should be suggested to…, largely because it helps people to…Furthermore,it is helpful to reduce the possibilities of being in the danger of suffering from…Finally,but not the least important point is that…usually contribute to…Therefore,it is better to take…instead of…It commonly leads to…

注释：首先，⋯⋯尤其对⋯⋯好。此外，⋯⋯应该多选用于⋯⋯，主要是因为它帮助人们⋯⋯。再者，它能帮助减少患⋯⋯的危险的概率。最后，但并非不重要的一点就是⋯⋯常导致⋯⋯，所以应该选用⋯⋯而不是⋯⋯。它经常导致⋯⋯。(https://www.daowen.com)

●第三段

In general,…,instead of…is of the first significance to the health of the…

In general,…is of the first significance to the health of people and a long life.

注释：总而言之，一个⋯⋯而不是⋯⋯对⋯⋯来说是保持健康的最重要的因素。

总而言之，⋯⋯对人们来说是保持健康长寿的最重要的因素。