五、每日佳作赏析

五、每日佳作赏析

Directions:For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Getting to Know the World outside the Campus.You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese:

1.大学生了解社会的必要性。

2.了解社会的途径（大众媒介、社会服务等）。

3.你打算怎么做？

范文

Getting to Know the World Outside the Campus

It（1）is of great significance for a college student to know the world outside the campus.In this（2）fast-developing“Information Age”，college students must（3）keep pace with the progress of the world.（4①）Additionally，by contacting the off-campus world，college students can have chance to get more practical skills.（4②）Therefore，（5）how to know the world outside the campus（6）is worth our attention

Many ways can be adopted by our college students to increase our knowledge of the world.（4③）Firstly，mass media，such as radios，televisions，newspapers and the Internet，are a good choice，（7）by which we can（8）be well informed about what is happening.（4④）Secondly，providing volunteer services is an efficient way to contact and know the society.（4⑤）Thirdly，we can take part-time jobs to increase our practical experience.

（4⑥）As for me，I will try to create and grasp more chances to contact the society.In my opinion，getting to know the off-campus world is（9①）as important（9②）as improving academic performance.（4⑦）Therefore，I suggest every college student should（10①）not（11）confine himself to the campus（10②）but often go outside.

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（1）“be of+n.”相当于“be+adj.”。

（2）复合形容词做定语，意为“迅速发展的”。

（3）意为“跟上”。

（4）衔接词语使文章条理清晰、意思连贯。

（5）“疑问词+动词不定式”结构充当主语。

（6）be worth sth./doing sth.意为“值得……”。

（7）which在定语从句中充当介词宾语。

（8）inform是及物动词，意为“通知，告知”，经常用作被动结构“be informed about/of”。

（9）同级比较结构。

（10）连接并列结构，意为“不是……而是……”。

（11）意为“将自己局限于”。