五、每日佳作赏析

五、每日佳作赏析

Direction:For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed？You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1.有人做好事期望得到回报。

2.有人认为应该像雷锋那样做好事不图回报。

3.你的观点。

范文

Nowadays，（1）different people holddifferent views about whether or not one should expect a reward when doing a good deed.Some people think that a good deed should be given a certain reward.They say it is agreeable with the rule of fairness.（2①）Also，rewards can stimulate people’s enthusiasm to do good deeds.

（3）However，there are many others who take Leifeng as a model and be always ready to help others（4）without expecting any reward.Everyone may be in trouble.（5）Only if you help others unselfishly，you can get others’help when you need it.（2②）Besides，they maintain that one can enjoy happiness in doing good deeds，（6）they think，（7）which is the best return.

（8）Weighing up these two arguments，Iprefer the second one.（2③）First，being happy to help others is one of Chinese people’s traditional virtues.（2④）Second，this virtue（9）is of more significance for the creation of a harmonious society.（2⑤）To conclude，（10①）it is every citizen’s responsibility（10②）to do good deeds without expecting any reward.

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（1）用于引出对某事物的不同观点。

（2）衔接词语使文章条理清晰、意思连贯。

（3）转折引出另一种观点。

（4）意为“不期望任何回报”，介词短语充当状语，注意此处without的用法。

（5）意为“只要”，引导条件状语从句。

（6）插入语。

（7）which引导非限制性定语从句。

（8）用于引出个人观点，weigh up意为“权衡”。

（9）“be of+n.”相当于“be+adj.”。

（10）固定句式：It is…for sb.+to do sth.其中it是形式主语，不定式短语是实际的主语。