叙事类典型作文操练
练习一
Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Thanks and Congratulations to My Friend.You should write at least 120 words but on more than 180 words,and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese
1.你好朋友的生日就快到了,祝他或她生日快乐。
2.从一件难忘的事回忆朋友对你的关爱。
3.友谊的重要性。
练习二
Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write an eye-witness account of a robbery.You should write at least 120 words but on more than 180 words,and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese
假设你在某日某时某地目击了一起抢劫事件,就此写一份见证书。见证书须包括以下几点:
1.抢劫发生的时间及地点。
2.你所见到的抢劫情况。
3.你对抢劫发生原因的分析。(https://www.daowen.com)
参考范文
练习一
Thanks and Congratulations to My Friend
The birthday of Cao Xiao,my best friend,will come soon.There is no more appropriate time than this for us to express our love and good wishes to her.So taking this good chance,I want to show my gratitude towards her for her long-time care and understanding.
Now I still remember clearly that experience of illness.It happened in our freshman year,when we had just entered into college for not a long time.I was in hospital because of suffering from an infectious disease.Being worried about being infected,my classmates would not like to go to the hospital to see me.However,Caoxiao volunteered to care about me almost everyday until I recovered completely,which made me feel deep love and concern from a friend.
Every time I remind this and all love she gave,I can understand the real meaning of friendship.I will cherish our friendship all the time.Furthermore,I will,like her,show my care and love to every friend of mine.I believe the word“A friend in need is a friend indeed”.
练习二
An Eye-witness Account of a Robbery
I am Li Ming,a college student.A week ago I witnessed a robbery on the street.The crime was so reckless and rampant that I was left a deep impression.
It was at about 5 P.M.,June 15th,when I was walking in a lonely road with few pedestrians around.Suddenly I heard a shout,“Freeze!Return my bag!”I found that a young boy was running ahead,and an old woman was exerting to chase him.Obviously it was a robbery.A few people stopped to watch,but nobody would like to help that old woman.As a result,soon the robber disappeared from our view.
Many factors contributed to the happening of this robbery.The robber’s low moral quality and legal consciousness was certainly the main one.But in my opinion,it was more because most people were too indifferent to the crime.If at that time the watchers had lent a hand,I believe,the robber could not have escaped.Therefore,it is high time that we united together to fight against the crimes.