四、每日佳作赏析

四、每日佳作赏析

Directions:For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Improve Public Morals.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words，and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese

1.目前社会上违反公德的行为仍然时有发生。

2.这些行为带来的危害。

3.你认为应该如何提高社会公德？

范文

Nowadays there are still many behaviors against public morality，（1）such as spitting or littering in public，cutting in line.（2①）One ofthe main reasons for these（2②）is that some people lack personal manners and public conscious-ness.（3①）In addition，（4）weak implementa-tion of the administration measures（5）contributea lot to these uncivilized behaviors.

（3②）Indeed，these small things in many people’s eyes（6）have brought great bad effects.（3③）Above all，these immoral behaviors disturb social orders and disrupt social stability.（3④）Moreover，one’s violating public morals not only invades others’benefits but also does harm to himself.For example，if most people buy pirated products，those original producers might lose the enthusiasm to continue their producing.

（7）Taking the above-mentioned intoconsideration，I think，it is high time that we tookeffective measures to improve public morals.（3⑤）On one hand，we must use education to（8）enhance their moral consciousness.（3⑥）On theother hand，the government should improve the administration system and ensure the（9）efficientimplementation of administration measures.（3⑦）In a word，the improvement of public morals depends on all of us.

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（1）意为“例如”，用于表示列举。

（2）列举原因时常用的句式。

（3）衔接词语使文章条理清晰、意思连贯。

（4）意为“管理措施执行不力”。

（5）列举原因时常用的句式。

（6）引出危害时常用的句式。

（7）引出解决办法时常用的句式。

（8）意为“提高公共意识”。

（9）意为“管理措施的有效执行”。