四、每日佳作赏析

四、每日佳作赏析

Directions:For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Your Attitude Towards Criticism.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words，and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese

1.每个人都可能会受到别人的批评。

2.不同的人对待批评的态度是不同的。

3.你怎么看待别人对你的批评？

范文

Every one of us may be criticized by others in our life.（1）For example，（2①）workers who fail to accomplish their tasks may be criticized by their employer；（2②）students who have poor performance in exams may be criticized by their teachers and parents.

（3）However，attitudes towards criticism（4）differ from person to person.（5①）Somepeople will become annoyed，and will try to defend themselves（6）by all means.（5②）Some people may（7）be indifferent to criticism.They just regard criticism as nonsense.（5③）But otherpeople accept criticism modestly and find their shortcomings from others’criticism，（8）who（9）tend to（10）stand a good chance of success.

As for me，I welcome others’criticism.I have always believed that old Chinese saying（11）“Good medicine that tastes bitter will help one’sillness”.In my opinion，（12）though criticism will make us unhappy，it can help us know our shortcomings and inadequacy.Therefore，we should（13）place more emphasis on others’ criticism，（14）instead of being annoyed with or（15）turn a deaf ear to it.

点评

（1）举例说明。

（2）排比句，结构相同，增加气势。

（3）转折引出对批评的不同态度，使上下文过渡自然，衔接紧密。(https://www.daowen.com)

（4）意为“各人不同”。

（5）列举了不同人的不同态度。

（6）意为“尽一切办法，务必”。

（7）意为“无动于衷，漠不关心”。

（8）who引导非限制性定语从句。

（9）意为“易于……，有……倾向”。

（10）意为“很有可能，大有机会”。

（11）引用谚语“良药苦口利于病”。

（12）though引导让步状语从句。

（13）意为“更加强调或重视”。

（14）意为“而不是”。

（15）意为“充耳不闻，置之不理”。