学会使用动态动词

动态动词往往比be，there be，make，need等静态动词更有活力，可以达到更好的写作效果。

如：原句：Please try our best to help this girl，help her to pass the most difficult period in life，and make her financial burden less and less.(https://www.daowen.com)

优化：Please try our best to help this girl，help her to pass the most difficult period in life，and relieve her financial burden.

原句：Each day，we can see there are a lot of foods in the garbage cans.

优化：Each day，we can see many students dump foods in the garbage cans.