八、每日佳作赏析

八、每日佳作赏析

Directions:For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Young People Should Have Ideals.You should write at least 120 words，and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese

1.人，尤其是年轻人应该有理想。

2.理想对于一个人的意义。

3.我们应该如何实现自己的理想？

范文

（1）“What are you going to do when yougrow up？”When I was a child，people often asked me this question about ideal.（2）Undoubtedly，every individual，（3）especially a young person，should have an ideal.（4）Hardly can we find any great people with no ideal when they were young.

An ideal（5）is of vital importance to one’s growth and success.（6①）On the one hand，an ideal is the target of one’s life.（7）Once you decide what your ideal is，you know（8）where togo and which way to take.（6②）On the otherhand，an ideal is（9）like the engine of vehicles.（10）Only when we have our own ideals，can wefind（11）the origin of energy and enthusiasm.

（12）Whatever your ideal is，careful plan and preparation（13）is vital to its final realization.（2③）Of course，the path（14）fromwhere you are to where you want to get is not always smooth and straight.Therefore，an optimistic，positive mind is（15）indispensable in the process of your pursuing your ideal.

点评

（1）疑问句开头，新颖独特，引人注意。

（2）副词或副词短语开头，丰富了句式。

（3）意为“尤其，特别”。(https://www.daowen.com)

（4）倒装句，否定词提前引起。

（5）“be of+n.”相当于“be+adj.”。

（6）意为“一方面，……。另一方面，……”，常用于表示列举。

（7）意为“一旦”。

（8）“疑问词+不定式”充当宾语。

（9）比喻使用恰当。

（10）倒装句，“only+状语”提前引起。

（11）意为“能量的来源”。

（12）意为“无论什么”，引导让步状语从句。

（13）意为“对……至关重要”。

（14）from…to连接的两个宾语从句的使用凸显语言功底。

（15）意为“不可或缺的”。