三、制造亮点词
如何让你的英语作文更有亮点？从历年书面表达高分文章来看，每篇文章都有“亮”点，即在用词、造句或段落安排上都有独到之处。要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色，写出自己的“亮”点。1使用同义词进行替换
使用同义词的好处在于首先可以向阅卷者展示考生词汇量的丰富，其次也可以使文章富有变化。因此，同义词的运用是衡量考生英语水平的一个很有力的标准，阅卷者认同你的同时，自然也会给你高分。请看下面的例子：
School teachers used to be the source of information.However，some people argue that teachers are not as important as before because there is an increasing variety of information resource.What is your opinion？
要对上面的句子进行重新描述，最简单的就是用同义词替换，请看下表：
2 使用各种形式的同根词进行替换
英语里面有很多同根词，通过单词的变换来吸引阅卷者眼球并获得高分是一个很好的办法。一些单词通过添加前缀或者后缀的方式可以衍生出很多新的词汇。而使用这些词汇可以避免重复原文当中的词，也可以向阅卷者展示你变化词汇的技巧。
比如，写作中我们经常会用到“知道”这个概念，我们可以用know这个词以及它的其他形式和它们的同义词来表示“知道”这个意思。如下所示：
3 使用短语进行替换
英语里同样拥有丰富的短语，使用它们，可以准确传达原文中的信息。在一些特殊情况下，短语也可以作为增加字数的方法。我们来看一个例子：
Some say that building more roads will help reduce the traffic congestion in big cities.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.Do you support or oppose this statement？
在这一段话里，可以替换的短语如下所示：
4 综合使用各种方法进行替换
经过了上述几种方法的讨论，我们可以进行综合的运用，切勿只拘泥于一种方法。比如，我们要表达“利益、好处”这个意思时，我们一般可以使用benefit这个词，我们也可以使用其他不同的形式来表达这个意思，比如：
用同义词对于原句进行替换后，再把原句的结构进行适当的变换，最终呈现在阅卷者面前的句子和原来的截然不同，但是意思基本一致。又比如：因特网对我们的日常生活带来很大的影响。这句话我们可以写出不同的搭配。比如：(https://www.daowen.com)
在上面这个表格里，对于这句话我们可以给出5×5×3=75种不同表达。可见同义词替换的威力有多么巨大。当然，在此提醒各位考生，要使自己的文章更吸引人，光变换单词是不够的，我们还要把单词和句子的结构变换相结合，从而使自己的文章更丰富多彩。
每日训练
Directions:For this part，you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Reduce Waste on Campus.You should write at least 200 words，and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese.
1.目前有些校园内浪费现象严重。
2.浪费的危害。
3.从我做起，杜绝浪费。
参考范文1
Reduce Waste on Campus
Nowadays，with the improvement of our living standards，the phenomenon of waste is becoming more and more serious on campus.A lot of food is left after each meal；brand-new clothes are thrown away；electric appliances are not turned off when there are no people in the dormitories.
The habit of waste can cause a lot of problems.Though China is developing very fast，there are still a large number of people living under poverty.Furthermore，China has such a large population to support with such limited store of energy；waste may cause a disaster for the whole country.It can also have effect on the psychology of university students.They are not used to taking efforts to earn their living，and they will keep this bad habit during their whole life.How can our nation develop if every one of us keepswasting？
To form a good habit of thrift is very important for everyone，especially for university students.We should try our best to protect the energy and resources of our country and our world.Please don't leave food in your plate after finishing your meals；please don't throw your clothes away when they are still new；please turn off lamps whenever you leave the dormitory.By doing such routines in our daily lives，we can not only save resources but also give some help to the people who are not so well-off as us.
参考范文2
Reduce Waste on Campus
At present，among so many colleges，waste is a frequently found phenomenon.Taking a walk on campus，one may be shocked by the sight of various kinds of waste—intact unworn foodstuff dumped everywhere，unworn clothes thrown in the dustbin，unnecessary things bought at will and so on.When going out with so-called friends，extravagant college students would prefer taxi to the bothersome crowded bus，buy themselves elegant dresses，and especially for girls，have meals in higher-grade restaurants and indulge themselves in expensive bars.All these make up a typical wasteful student's life on campus.
It is the wasting habit that will bring about many negative effects.First，it is a waste of money and a waste of other people's laborious fruits.Uncountable taxpayers' work makes the adolescents have the opportunity to receive higher education in universities.There's no reason for them to waste time and money in self-enjoyment.Considering from the social perspective，it is a loss to the agricultural and industrial productions when their work is mistreated and wasted.Apart from that，students who get used to wasting don't know how to respect other people and their work and become arrogant gradually in every aspect of their daily lives on campus.If the case is to be so，it is a failure of modern education.
There are so many bad effects if students develop a habit of waste；we should do something to put an end to this behavior.Consume when it is necessary，and never dump food in good condition or things still useful and so on.By conforming to these principles，we can learn to pay respect to others and their diligent work and become more responsible people with a right sense of morality.