四、每日佳作赏析

四、每日佳作赏析

Directions:For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic College Students Should Attend Physical Exercise.You should write at least 120 words，and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese:

1.有些大学生不喜欢参加体育锻炼，这种做法是相当不可取的。

2.大学生参加体育锻炼的好处。

3.你喜欢参加何种体育锻炼？

范文

Physical exercise is a necessary part of college life.（1①）However，still some college students do not like to attend sports activities.They think those activities waste their time and influence their study.（2）Indeed，（3）it is very unwise for collegestudents to keep distance from physical exercise.

Physical exercise（4）is very beneficial to college students.（1②）First of all，（5）attend-ing sports activities can help college students build a strong body and keep abundant energy.（1③）Moreover，physical exercise is（6）an effectiveway to release pressure and keep a pleasant mood.（1④）Besides，（7）by attending physical activities，students can have chances to contact and communicate with others，（8）which can help them improve their social skills.

Nowadays colleges and universities provide many sports facilities for students to do physical exercise.Students can choose freely（9）accord-ing to their interests and needs.（10）As for me，I am keen on all kinds of ball games，（11）especially football and basketball.From these games，I have gained great pleasure and made many friends.（1⑤）To conclude，every college student（12） should not hesitate to attend sports activities.

点评

（1）衔接词语使文章条理清晰，意思连贯。(https://www.daowen.com)

（2）意为“实际上，事实上”，相当于in fact。

（3）固定句式：It is…for sb.to do sth.其中it是形式主语，不定式短语是实际的主语。

（4）意为“对……有益”。

（5）动名词短语做主语。

（6）意为“缓解压力的一种有效的方式”。

（7）by表示方式、方法。

（8）which引导非限制性定语从句。

（9）意为“根据自己的兴趣和需要”。

（10）用于引出个人喜好。

（11）意为“尤其是，特别是”。

（12）意为“应该毫不犹豫地做某事”。