四、每日佳作赏析

四、每日佳作赏析

Directions:For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Which Mode of Travel Do You Like？You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words，and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese:

1.有的人喜欢参加旅行团旅行。

2.有的人喜欢自己独自旅行。

3.你喜欢的是……

范文

（1①）When it comes to travel mode，（1②）different people have different preferences.（2①）Some people are in favor of the package tour.（2②）However，others would like to travel on their own.

（3）Those people who hold the first opinionbelieve package tour saves them a lot of trouble，（4）such as finding the accommodation.（5①）In addition，they say，package tour can relatively（6）ensure the safety of the tourists.（7）However，still others think differently.In their opinions，they can get（8）a greater degree ofindependence and freedom，and can take their time to（9）appreciate the views.（5②）Besides，they argue that it will cost（10①）less to travel on one’s own（10②）than join package tours.

（11）Weighing up these two arguments，Iprefer to the latter one.（5③）For one thing，I do not have to obey the regulation set by the travel agency.（5④）For another，I can decide by myself（12①）when to start on my way，（12②）where to linger a little longer（12③）and whichspot toskip over.（13）Considering all these，I think traveling on my own is a better mode of travel.

点评

（1）引出有争议话题的常用句式。

（2）提出对立观点的常用句式。(https://www.daowen.com)

（3）引出第一种观点的理由。

（4）表示列举。

（5）衔接词语使文章条理清晰、意思连贯。

（6）意为“确保，保证”。

（7）引出对相反观点的论证。

（8）意为“更大的自由度”。

（9）意为“欣赏”。

（10）注意比较结构的使用。

（11）用于表明自己的倾向。

（12）平行结构增加了文章的文采。

（13）意为“鉴于这些”，用于得出结论。