典型真题词句点评

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三、典型真题词句点评

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Reading Selectively or Extensively?You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words,and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese

1.有人认为读书要有选择。

2.有人认为应当博览群书。

3.你的看法。

范文

(1)When it comes to reading way,there is no complete agreement amongpeople.(2①)Some people(3①)take itfor granted that reading should be selective.(2②)However,others(3②)maintain that it(4①)does more good to read extensively.

(5①)Those people who hold thefirst opinion(3③)believe reading selectively can save much time and(6)enable them to have enough time to(7)digest(8)what they have read.(9①)In addition,they(3④)insist that books of low quality(10①)may(4②)do harmto the youths(11①)who lack enough ability to tell the true from the false.(5②)However,still others think differently.(3⑤)In their opinions,students cannot get a general view about the world(12)without extensive reading.(9②)Besides,extensive reading can(13)extend theirrange of knowledge and broaden theirvision.(14)Weighing up these two arguments,Iprefer the former one.(9③)For one thing,(15)as a college student,we should choose those books(16)suitable to our reading level.(9④)For another,(17①)without selection,our reading(10②)may become(17②)aimless and blind,(11②)which will be(18)less efficient.(19)Considering these,we(10③)may reasonably conclude that college students should read selectively.

点评

句式上:本文长短句搭配合理,句式富于变化,句子之间和句子内部紧凑连贯,句子表达简洁明快。

用词上:本文用词简洁具体,富于变化,词性多样,体现出较强的语言驾驭能力。

(1)用于引出有争议的话题时常用的句式。

(2)用于提出两种对立观点时常用的句式。

(3)用不同的词表示“认为”,用词富于变化。

(4)前者意为“有好处”,后者意为“有害处”。(https://www.daowen.com)

(5)用于引出每一种观点的理由。

(6)意为“使……能够”。

(7)意为“消化”,用词形象生动。

(8)what引导宾语从句。

(9)列举时常用的衔接词语,使文章条理清晰。

(10)使用限定词,使表达更加客观。

(11)注意定语从句的运用。

(12)介词短语“without…”相当于条件从句。

(13)意为“拓宽知识面和视野”。

(14)用于表明个人倾向,动名词短语开头。

(15)介词短语开头,句式富于变化。

(16)形容词短语做后置定语。

(17)形容词使用恰当。

(18)比较级使用恰当。

(19)用于得出结论,动名词短语开头。

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