一、阐述主题型
阐述主题型作文一般需要考生按照提纲要求提出论点,通过举例等方式论证观点,最后再对论点进行总结。这类题目的写作思路是:
1.阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义;
2.分析并举例以使其更充实。
(一)阐述主题型写作思路及模板举例
1.写作思路
第一段:主题句:提出观点
扩展句一:阐述论点中蕴涵的道理或正确性的表现。
扩展句二:进一步阐述论点中蕴涵的道理或正确性表现,或是强调论点的正确性。
第二段:列举论据
主题句:引出论据,开始论证观点。
扩展句一:列举第一个例子。
扩展句二:进一步说明例一。
扩展句三:列举第二个例子。
扩展句四:进一步说明例二。
第三段:总结观点
主题句:承接上文,重申重点。
扩展句:提出建议或指出注意事项。
结尾句:总结全文,指出正确的做法或态度,呼应论点。
2.写作模本举例
The good old proverb(名言或谚语)reminds us that(释义).It has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study.Indeed,we can learn many things from it.
There are numerous examples supporting this argument.First of all,(理由一).For example,(举例说明).Secondly,(理由二).Another case is that(举例说明).Furthermore,(理由三).(https://www.daowen.com)
All the above-mentioned tell us that/It is no doubt that/Judging from the evidence offered,we might safely draw the conclusion that(重申观点).(提出建议或指出注意事项。总结全文,呼应论点)If you understand it and apply it to your study or work,you’ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.
(二)经典范例
下面我们以复旦大学2012年博士研究生入学英语考试作文试题为例对阐述主题型作文的写作方法加以说明:
Part V Writing(15%)任选一题300词左右
Steve Jobs名言:
1.Stay hungry,stay foolish.
2.We live to change the world.
下面以题目1.Stay hungry,Stay Foolish为例。
写作步骤分析:
分析题目可知,这篇文章的写作目的是要通过举例论证来说明“Stay hungry,stay foolish.”(求知若饥,虚心如愚)这一观点。
列出提纲,点出每段的主要内容。
第一段:提出观点,分析Stay hungry,stay foolish.的含义,指出其中蕴藏的真理。
第二段:列举出你对Jobs这句名言的理解。
第三段:总结全文,总结他的名言对你(一个即将参加博士生入学考试的学生)的激励作用。
参考范文
Stay Hungry,Stay Foolish
Steve Jobs,former CEO of the Apple Computer Company,used the motto“Stay hungry,stay foolish”which has motivated people worldwide when delivering the 2005commencement address at Stanford.
From my point of view,the motto“Stay hungry,stay foolish”is full of wisdom.First of all,it suggests that we should always be hungry for knowledge and new ideas.Only by pursuing knowledge as if we were hungry for food and remaining humble as if we were foolish can we become more creative and innovative and make great contributions to society as Jobs did.In addition,“stay foolish”proves indicates a humble attitude towards knowledge will give us a lasting power to become better and better.
As a graduate student who will take the doctoral entrance examination soon,Job's motto has encouraged me greatly and kept me moving forward.No matter how much great success I have achieved,it is not the achievement but the hunger for learning that really matters.There is no end to learning,in which case I must learn not only curiously but also with modesty.Only by staying hungry and staying foolish will I learn better and get higher scores in the coming entrance examination,thus laying a solid foundation for my future successes.
All in all,we students should bear the motto in mind.Always stay hungry and stay foolish.