结尾段的写作技巧

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三、结尾段的写作技巧

根据我们前面所讲的“三段论”写作模式,文章最后的一小段结尾段是最能体现作者观点的一段。这一段虽短,但正是在这一段里,作者将在首段所提的观点,经过中间段翔实而有力地论证之后,在这里进行浓缩、总结、概括。结尾段一般都独立成段,比较短小,有时为了意思的完整性则有可能将最后一小段与中间段合并。但是在考试中,特别是在段首句作文或有提示的作文中一般应写成独立的一小段。好的结尾一般都具有三个特点:一是简洁有力;二是出人意料;三是寓意无穷。

结尾段的写作一般有以下几种方法:

1.总结全文

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Hence,to a certain degree,students benefit a lot from part-time jobs if they can keep a good balance between working and learning.With plenty of social experiences,they will grow more independent and gain more understanding.

本文用More and more一句以现象描述开头。然后用Then,why...一句作为过渡句,中间段用列举法。用Hence...一句总结全文,结尾段和开头段一样都是短小精悍。

与前面所讲的“开宗明义”相反,有的文章,在结尾时才阐明其中心思想,表达作者的明确观点,这就是通常所谓的“卒章显志”,其特点是,直接总结全文,将作者的观点或全文的中心思想在最后进行高度概括,和盘托出。其特点是平直明确,具有归纳性和总结性。

2.首尾呼应

针对开头所讲的观点、看法,在结尾段中提出一个满意的解决方案。

Introduction paragraph:

A person born in the twentieth century has seen many changes take place in almost all areas of human life.Some people are excited by the challenges that these changes offer,while others long to return to the simpler,less automated life-style of the past.Living in the twentieth century has certain advantages,such as a higher standard of living,but it also has some disadvantages,such a polluted environment,the depersonalization of human relationships and the weakening of spiritual values.

Conclusion paragraph:

In conclusion,although the twentieth century has indeed given us a lot of advantages by making us richer,healthier and freer to enjoy our lives,it has,in my opinion,not made us wiser.The twentieth century has also made our Earth dirtier,our people less humane and our spiritual lives poorer.We should continue to enjoy the benefits of technological advancements because they free us to pursue our interests and goals.However,we must make collaborative efforts to preserve our natural environment for future generations.Moreover,we should take the time now to make our lives more meaningful in an increasingly impersonal,mechanized world.

3.终局点睛

终局点睛指的是在文章的末尾用一两句含义丰富的话点出全篇的主旨所在,用含蓄、委婉的方法来曲折隐晦地表达作者的思想,使文章的主题得到升华。

When comparing men and women in the matter of fashion,the conclusions to be drawn are obvious.Do the constantly changing fashions of women's clothes,one wonders,reflect basic qualities of inconstancy and instability?Men are too clever to let themselves be cheated by fashion designers.Do their unchanging styles of dress reflect basic qualities of stability and reliability?That is for you to decide.

4.提出建议,发出号召

All in all,with people's standards of living getting higher and higher,changes in their diet are bound to occur and will become more apparent and greater.

用All in all来总结全文,同时,也对未来提出展望。(https://www.daowen.com)

5.通过设问或反问来结束全文

If there were no homework on weekends,students would come to school on Monday well refreshed and willing to study.Teachers,don't you agree?

用反问结尾,虽然形式是问句,但意义却是肯定的,具有明显的强调作用,引起读者思考。

每日训练

1.Directions:Write an essay of no less than 200 words on the topic given below.Use the proper space on your ANSWER SHEET.

What does work mean to you?Is it just a means to make ends meet and to cover life expenses?

2.Directions:Write an essay of no less than 200 words on Private Cars.Use the proper space on your ANSWER SHEET.

参考范文

1 The Meaning of Work

For many people,a job means a good salary which can make ends meet and coverlife expenses.In my opinion,however,the meaning of work is more than a good salary.To me,the kind of job worthy of devotion involves creation and contribution.

Work means new creations to the society.As science and technology progress,computers and robots are used widely.We might sometimes doubt the necessity of our very existence.Yet creative jobs,such as teaching,writing,scientific research,and management,which require a lot of wisdom and imagination or involve many understandings,will build up self-confidence in ourselves and help to push our civilization further.During the process of creation,our work will constantly provide us with challenges so that we can develop and improve ourselves.

Work also means the contribution one can make which will lead our country to prosperity.I remember that the first time I came to Beijing,on the train I was shocked withsome shabby huts,which were actually people's dwelling places.Those huts kept flashing into my mind,reminding me of our duty to help people out of such a life.Therefore,work does not only mean something about one's own life,but something also about a bright future for our country and our people.

People can gain enjoyment from creative and contributive work.If you do not enjoy your work,even if it brings you a very good salary,you are not really leading a happy and meaningful life.

Private Cars

2 A few years ago,having a private car might be a wild dream to many Chinesefamilies.But today,you can see the number of private cars running along the road and street is increasing rapidly.Statistics show that one in every six families in big cities has a car.Some people say that it is good because the number of car ownerships reflects a country's auto industry,which in turn shows the country's general economic development.The fact that more and more people can afford a car demonstrates that people in China enjoy a higher standard of living than they did before.Besides,a private car also adds a new dimension to a family's work,daily life and leisure activities.

Other people think differently.They argue that having private cars may not necessarily mean a more advanced society.It may bring about more stress,instead.More cars would consume more petroleum,produce more air pollution,and thus aggravate the already serious environmental problems.What's more,another problem remains yet to be solved.With road conditions being what they are especially in urban areas,accidents become a common occurrence,resulting in thousands of deaths per year.No wonder cars have been considered as the Number One deadly weapon in the modern world.

I find some truth in both of the arguments mentioned above.I feel it a personal choice to buy a private car or not.If you can afford it and you really need it to get around,having a car is fine.But remember,try to use environment-friendly type of gasoline and take special care while driving.If you don't have much need for cars in your work and life,there is no need to follow fashion or keep up with the Jones.Remember,when you cycle,you are living a healthy life and at the same time contributing to our environment protection.

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