三、典型段落操练
要求:请撰写下列作文,注意其中概述现象段和描写图表段的写法。
练习一
Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Losing Weight.You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese
1.越来越多的人,尤其是女性热衷于减肥。
2.分析人们减肥的原因。
3.盲目减肥可能会产生副作用。
练习二
Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Changes in the Ownership of Houses.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words,and base your composition on the chart and the outline given in Chinese below

1.根据上图描述该市住房产权的变化。
2.分析产生这些变化的原因。
3.说明这些变化对个人和社会产生的影响。
参考范文
练习一(https://www.daowen.com)
Losing Weight
第一段:概述现象段
Nowadays,more and more people,especially young females,are trying to lose unwanted weight.The number of people taking part in all kinds of fat farms or fitness clubs has been on the rise in recent years.Besides,more and more people are joining the army of being on diet.In order to keep fit,many young girls eat only one meal every day,and some even do not eat anything.
第二段:说明原因段
There are three main reasons behind this craze in losing weight.Firstly,as we see,most young people,especially women,want to have a better figure.They try to lose weight to look more beautiful.Secondly,quite a few people want to reduce excessive fat for their health since obesity is often very harmful to health.Thirdly,still some people are out of consideration for work reguirements,the majority of whom are actors and actresses.In order to meet the role requirements,sometimes they have to lose much weight in a short time.
第三段:说明害处段
However,dieting might bring great negative effects on people.For one thing,quite a lot of people don’t really need dieting to keep healthy,and they diet just because they want to keep slim.For them,dieting not only is useless but also might damage their health.For another,some people lack enough knowledge on how to diet scientifically.As a result,they are likely to suffer from malnutrition.Considering the serious damage of unhealthy dieting,we need professional guidance in dieting.
练习二
Changes in the Ownership of Houses
第一段:描写图表段
According to the chart,we can see clearly that in the past decade the ownership of houses in this city has changed greatly.In 1995,the proportion of state-owned houses is far higher than that of private houses,taking up respectively 75%and 25%.However,5 years later,the proportion of private-owned houses rose to 40%,and by 2000,it has reached 80%.It is obvious that more and more individuals have owned their private houses.
第二段:说明原因段
The following three reasons can account for the rapid growth of private housing ownership.Firstly,state subsidies for public housing are gradually eliminated.That is to say,without the housing subsidy,people are encouraged to buy their own private houses.Secondly,with the rapid development of economy,people’s income has risen significantly.Thirdly,various forms of mortgage loans with reasonable interest permit people to improve their housing condition in advance.As a result,people gradually have a strong desire to own a house of their own.
第三段:说明影响段
The change of the ownership of houses exerts a positive influence on the society.For one thing,this market-driven housing policy can lead to better resource allocation.For another,since more and more citizens are using mortgage and installments to buy their apartments,they form a new industry,broad the business of banks,and promote the whole economy.