四、每日佳作赏析

四、每日佳作赏析

Directions:For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Green Food.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words，and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese:

1.近年来，“绿色食品”变得越来越流行。

2.分析这种现象产生的原因。

3.你对该现象的看法。

范文

As more and more people focus on health diet，green food has begun to（1）draw more andmore attention by the public.In recent years，the market demand for green food has（2）increaseddramatically，and all kinds of green food have（3）emerged in an endless stream.（4）Why doesgreen food become so popular in China？（5①）Above all，（6）compared with ordinary food，green food is healthier，safer and more nutritious.（5②）Moreover，nowadays，many vegetables are polluted because of the usage of agricultural chemicals，（7）while green food is free of pollution.（5③）Besides，（8）with theimprovement of the living standards，more people can afford a healthier but more expensive lifestyle.So green food，（9）despite its higher price，still becomes people’s favorite food.

（5④）However，nowadays the market is full of real and fake green food，（10）making manyconsumers confused.（5⑤）Therefore，the government must strengthen the supervision and administration of green food market.（5⑥）Besides，consumers should increase the knowledge of green food.（11）Only in this way can greenfood play a more positive role in people’s life.

点评

（1）意为“引起越来越多的公众注意”。(https://www.daowen.com)

（2）意为“显著地增加”。

（3）意为“层出不穷”。

（4）引出原因时常用的句式。

（5）衔接词语使文章条理清晰、意思连贯。

（6）过去分词短语做状语，意为“与……相比”。

（7）while表示对比。

（8）意为“随着生活水平的提高”。

（9）插入语，意为“尽管价格较高”。

（10）现在分词短语做状语。

（11）倒装句，“only+状语”提前引起部分倒装。